Teachers feedback

Today in media we received feedback from our teacher.
We re-planned our story board as we were told that some of our shots needed improvement.
The shots which we are going to improve are:

• Leaving the college scene, for this scene improvements such as match cuts need to be improved so that it's more understandable for people viewing it to understand. 
• We also planned to incorporate a newspaper stating that one of the friends had died. Which should hopefully make the opening a lot more understanding to viewers, we got given this idea because having a person in white doesn't show that she's a ghost. In order to make it more understandable we decided to include a newspaper which explains that. 
• Also we decided to re film the library scene and make it a lot more interesting for example have her looking for universities. And also some of the clips were wonky.